America should vote for Donald Trump, to make America great again.
Donald Trump wants to make the United states a better country. According to Donald Trump"I'm a tremendous believer in education. But education has to be at a local level. We are rated 28 in the world--the United States!--think of it!--28 in the world--and, frankly, we spend far more per pupil than any other country in the world by far, it's not even a close second.” If you put Hillary in office she is going to have the prices of everything go up, such as gas prices, taxes, and more. Hillary Clinton wants to take down all of the coal businesses, so that will cause us to have less jobs for the people that work there, so it will make the economy worse. She has also lied about all of the private emails, and she is wanting to have all the isis and other foreign people over to our country even though there mostly terrorists. Hillary Clinton wants to send money over to Iraq!! Why ?According to Donald Trump “Well, I want to take away their wealth. And, as you know, for years I've been saying, 'Don't go into Iraq.' They went into Iraq. They destabilized the Middle East. It was a big mistake. Okay, now we're there”. According to The O'reilly Factor “Clinton lied when she claimed never to have received classified information on her private, unsecured email system. In fact, there was far too much classified information on her server to allow that subterfuge to work”. If Trump becomes president she will be put in jail for what she has done. Hillary Clinton said she wants to take away all the gun violence. According to Jeb Bush: “We don't need to add new rules. We need to focus on what the bigger issue is. We should focus on is the violence in our communities, and the other issue is mental health. Why not begin to deal with the process of mental health issues so that people that are spiraling out of control because of mental health challenges don't have access to guns.” According to Donald Trump: “What Jeb said is absolutely correct. We have a huge mental health problem in this country. We're closing hospitals, we're closing wards, we're closing so many because the states want to save money. We have to get back into looking at what's causing it. The guns don't pull the trigger. It's the people that pull the trigger and we have to find out what is going on. You get the Congress. You get the Senate. You get together. You do legislation.” “Hillary wants to make new rules, but we don’t need new rules. Hillary wants to take our guns away, she isn’t focusing on the violence in our communities, and mental health, but she just wants to talk about what makes her look good she doesn’t even care about the little stuff” According to The O'reilly factor.
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Mr. B
11/14/2016 08:18:01 am
Need to build an introduction based on your topic sentences - Most of your 2nd paragraph is not your own writing. You have a lot of copied information with very little elaboration on your own thoughts - You need to put in your own elaboration for a higher grade you didn't convince me to vote for Trump
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